After completing and presenting our group film pitches, everybody in the class had to fill out review sheets, giving us feedback on clear genre, target audience, why it will be interesting, character, setting, mood, style, enigma, similar films/ inspirations and any other film advice or concerns. By receiving these sheets, it allowed us to gain a further understanding from an audience point of view, of how our film will come across and seem. We wanted to know whether the idea and concept was appropriate to our chosen genre. However, since giving our group film pitch, we have changed our ideas further, meaning the genre too.
These are our feedback results on average:
What is the genre? Is it clear? - War film - action - yes very clear.
Who is the target audience and why would they pay to see it? - The target audience is for over 15's. They would pay to see it because it includes a good story line, and lots of action
Does it introduce character and setting? - Yes, it introduces main character Sam, and sets the scene of a battle field. You also see scenes of Sam with his mother, giving us an insight into his life.
Is the narrative interesting? Does it create enigma? - Yes, the narrative is interesting, represents our everyday lives, and shows Sam's life. It also shows enigma because you want to find out why Sam is lying on the floor.. What will happen to him?.... What happened to Sam's Father?... What will happen in the army?.... What happens to Sam's Mother?
What films is it similar to? - War films like Saving Private Ryan, Forrest Gump, Beginning section like Run All Night.
Comments/ advice to make it better- Try to have less happening. But overall really good idea.
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